You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.

#job #week

I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

this

letter with the crucial purpose of asking for,

additionally

,I am starting a new job next week.

However

I have some problems, and

for

this

reason, I want to start work. To be honest, for

this

important thing , I have a first problem my broken left leg. At the moment I have a hospital. But I want to go home next 3 weeks.

For

this

reason, I want to start my job next month . So I am sorry about your .

Finally

, having given the previous facts, I am available any time if you need any

further

information regarding the situation at your earliest convenience

as well as

look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Thus

, do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

148 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.

Fully explain your ideas

Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

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