The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction on 1960.
The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction
on
1960.
As can be observed from the maps, the Queen Mary Hospital changed rapidly between 1960 and 2000. The most efficient was Change preposition
in
opening
of three different stages in Correct article usage
the opening
hospitals
development.
In 1960, the Queen Mary Hospital was constructed close to the main road. Near the shopping Change the noun form
hospital
centre
, behind Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
a
car park and behind of shopping Correct article usage
the
centre
it is farmland. Use synonyms
Linking Words
While in
1980, Correct word choice
In
hospital
opened a new branch – pharmacy in a half Add an article
the hospital
place
of a former shopping Correct article usage
the place
centre
. In the next half built cancer Use synonyms
centre
. Farmland turned into nursing school. Use synonyms
Car
park stayed the same place. In Correct article usage
The car
2000s
, Change the article
the 2000s
cancer
Add an article
the cancer
centre
Use synonyms
has
tripled, but nursing Unnecessary verb
apply
school
and car Fix the agreement mistake
schools
park
decreased in size. It Fix the agreement mistake
parks
will
be Wrong verb form
would
obviously
Change the word
obvious
,
if Remove the comma
apply
shopping
Correct article usage
the shopping
centre
stayed around Use synonyms
of
medical buildings.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the street across the main road turned into a Linking Words
three staged
hospital department.Correct your spelling
three-stage
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