The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of people
who visited islands and cruise
ships
between 2010 and 2017
Overall
, the number
of people
who travel on the island rose between 2012 and 2019 while
higher than on cruise
ships
in 2016. On the other hand
, the number
of people
staying on cruise
ships
remained between 2013 and 2015. However
, since 2010, the number
of tourists
has significantly increased.
In 2012, the number
of tourists
who stayed on the island was 0.25 million
, compared to 1.25 million
who chose to stay on cruise
ships
so there was a substantial difference in numbers at this
time. By 2015, the figure had a stable increase on the islandm
after the next year the Correct your spelling
island
islands
number
of people
who visited the island was more than cruise
ships
around 1.5 million
tourists
.
Since 2013, the number
of tourists
has not changed as much on cruise
chips until 2015. After the next year, people
chose that decreased to around 1.25 million
. Although
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
choused
Verb problem
chose
cruise
ships
was not increased
the Verb problem
,
number
of total tourists
was stable rose
steadily until the end of the data.Correct word choice
and rose
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