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The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the figure of the Catholic community
in
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from
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 2010 to 2013 in
China
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,
India
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, the Philippines, Vietnam,
Korea
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 and Japan.
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,
while
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China
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's and
India
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's number of citizens climbed significantly,
Korea
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's populace experienced a downward development. Throughout the period, the data reveals a significant increase in inhabitants in
China
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 and
India
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. Both countries almost doubled the amount from 9,000,000 to 15,000,000 and 10,570,000 to 19,000,000, respectively.
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 to
this
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 positive development in both countries,
mainly
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Korea
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 suffered from a decreasing figure.
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, the country lost over half of its people in 2010. In 2010, to illustrate the point,
Korea
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 remained a number of 5,270,000 inhabitants
whereas
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 it declined to 1,319,000 citizens in 2013. In conclusion,
while
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China
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 and
India
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 profited from an upward trend in the number of inhabitants from 2010 and 2013,
Korea
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's public decreased strongly during
this
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 time period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, korea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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