The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the figure of the Catholic community
in
2010 to 2013 in Change preposition
from
China
, India
, the Philippines, Vietnam, Korea
and Japan. Overall
, while
China
's and India
's number of citizens climbed significantly, Korea
's populace experienced a downward development.
Throughout the period, the data reveals a significant increase in inhabitants in China
and India
. Both countries almost doubled the amount from 9,000,000 to 15,000,000 and 10,570,000 to 19,000,000, respectively.
In contrast
to this
positive development in both countries, mainly
Rephrase
apply
Korea
suffered from a decreasing figure. For instance
, the country lost over half of its people in 2010. In 2010, to illustrate the point, Korea
remained a number of 5,270,000 inhabitants whereas
it declined to 1,319,000 citizens in 2013.
In conclusion, while
China
and India
profited from an upward trend in the number of inhabitants from 2010 and 2013, Korea
's public decreased strongly during this
time period.Submitted by nina-zimmer on
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