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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.
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The given bar chart illustrates what percentage of Canadian people subscribed to social network websites categorizing from non to five
sites
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 in a two-year period. Looking at the
overall
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 perspective, it is apparent that using one
site
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 is more popular than others in both years of 2014 and 2015. In 2014, the graph indicates that subscribing to one
site
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 was ranked first with 36%, followed by "No
sites
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" and "Two
sites
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" with 22 and 23
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percent
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, respectively. The
people
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number of people
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 who used "Three
sites
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" were 12%,
whereas
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 more websites which were selected by audiences are neglectable. With regard to the proportion of subscribers in 2015, 28
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percent
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 of people were fond of using "One
site
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" as the first rank similar to what happened in 2014. In
this
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 regard, "No
Site
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" and "Two
Site
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" groups absorbed 21 and 24
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percent
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 of individuals. The remaining categories including more than three websites drew the attention of 16, 8 and 4
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percent
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 of users in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sites, site, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart overview
  • social networking sites
  • trends
  • adoption
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • segment
  • growth or reduction
  • social media habits
  • patterns
  • multi-platform usage
  • decline
  • non-users
  • conclusion
  • digital communication
  • social media marketing
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