21.Some people think leaving their home country provides more opportunities for working or studying, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write an essay with no less than 250 words.
Nowadays,
while
most people prefer living and working abroad to meet their needs, others believe that remaining in the motherland is an honour and a good chance to preserve customs and traditions. Linking Words
However
, it is admitted that there are both pros and cons of these views.
On the one hand, starting a new life abroad enables individuals to develop their careers and broaden their horizons. In the USA, Linking Words
for example
, there is a system called Green Card which gives migrants opportunities to work and live there legally and safely. Linking Words
Besides
, students can win scholarships to enhance their academic and social skills Linking Words
while
studying and living with host families. There is no doubt that it Linking Words
also
helps them to build their future lives independently.
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On the other hand
, it would be better for inhabitants to stay in their own country in order to contribute to the development of their living zone and follow their national traditions. Linking Words
Otherwise
, it would be likely to cause the depopulation of a country. Linking Words
For instance
, in a Switzerland city, the number of human reproductions has significantly declined because of interest in living abroad among adults. Linking Words
Moreover
, living in the motherland prevents people from feeling a sense of isolation.
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To sum up
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although
there are both positive and negative sides to the above-mentioned points, living with the rest of the family members is the best choice for humankind.Linking Words
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