The diagram shows the different stages in the process of recycling waste paper by machine.
The diagram illustrates the process through which
paper
is recycled by a machine.
Overall
, the recycling of wasted paper
is a linear process and it has 6 steps, starting with wasted paper
collection, and ending with usable paper
.
Firstly
, the wasted notepaper is collected from businesses and public paper
banks and it is sorted by hand and then
graded . In this
step, if the paper
is unsuitable, it is removed. Next,
the pieces that are suitable are transported to the paper
mill.
After that, the pieces of paper
that were transported are cleaned and pulped , and the surplus of other materials is removed. The remains are de-inked by eliminating the inks and glues . Finally
, the paper
that has gone through those processes is then
put into the paper
-making machine which produces a new usable paper
. This
process has 6 main steps and transforms wasted paper
into usable one.Submitted by zaineajessica on
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