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The production of instant noodles is illustrated in the given pictures.

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The production of instant
noodles
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 is illustrated in the given pictures. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that there are 8 stages in
this
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 process, beginning with
delivering
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the delivery
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 of flour with the help of
truck
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a truck
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 and culminating in
labelling
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the labelling
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 of products for
consumer
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consumers
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. In the first stage of manufacturing, flour which is kept in the storage silos is loaded onto
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the
a
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truck, and it is
then
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 delivered to the factory. After that, some water and oil are added to
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the
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flour.
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, these are mixed in a mixer to prepare
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dough
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the dough
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.
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dough
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 passes into the rollers
,
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apply
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and
turned
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turns
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 into
dough
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 sheets. In the subsequent stage,
dough
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 sheets are cut by slitter which is used to divide the sheets into smaller strips. Following on from
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, disc-shaped
noodles
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 are made from these strips. After the
noodles
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 are cooked in the oil, they are dried for
certain
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a certain
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times
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time
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. Before
packaging
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the packaging
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 stage, ready
noodles
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 are placed into cups, and some vegetables and spices,
such
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 as pepper are
then
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 added to the cups. In the
last
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 step, the cups are packaged and sealed,
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finally
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and finally
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, they are ready for sale.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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