In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative?

Having a

home

is one of the main requirements of every individual in the world. In contemporary society

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,

due to

various reasons like financial inability many

people

are not

owner

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owners

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of a

home

and have to rent

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one.

Unfortunately

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this

phenomenon is usually happening in developing

countries

and among

people

who cannot afford to buy a house. In

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I will delve

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this

issue.

According to

research conducted by the

Economic department

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Economics Department

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of Tehran University, owning a

home

is one of the most significant issues in developing

countries

with recessed

economy

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economies

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.

In other words

, in these

countries

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countries,

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substantial inflation and sharp increase of life expenditure have become a concerning issue among

people

and most of the tenants are determined to accumulate money in order to have their own

home

. Because, they are aware of the biting fact that if they do not try assiduously to buy a

home

, after

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years having a domicile would be just a dream for them.

Furthermore

,

this

has been considered as a significant

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sign

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of

countries

with unstable

economy

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economies

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and intensive inflation.

In other words

, the government and authorities of these

countries

do not have the knowledge and ability

of managing

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country

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the country

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.

As a result

, the public

people

would be

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sacrificed

of

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this

crisis and have to struggle with financial, social, cultural and many other difficulties. It can be concluded that these

people

are deprived of glees of life

due to

the geographical region where they were born. In a nutshell, I think every individual in the world is entitled to obviate their essential and basic needs

such

as

:

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domicile, food and clothes.

However

, in some regions on the Earth

due to

inflation and financial critics a large number of folk are not only deprived of essential needs for life but

also

have to engage with excruciating problems.