scientist have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and we must limit use of energy diskpart warning many people do not do this what are the reasons for that and how people can encourage in protecting the environment?
In
last
Correct article usage
the last
tow
or three Correct your spelling
two
decades
scientists Add a comma
decades,
ask
to preserve the environment by energy use limitations.Wrong verb form
have asked
However
, some people refuse this
and the resources is
lack in awareness and lack in economic friendly powers. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
While
the possible solutions are develope
in awareness and government rules.
Correct your spelling
developed
To begin
with, earth
is suffering from the huge use of power Add an article
the earth
due to
the limited in this
issue knowledge. In other words
, individuals not
aware of the amount of damage they Add a missing verb
are not
done
in environments Add a missing verb
have done
such
as air pollution and Marine pollution.Moreover
, the number of services and facilities that depend on energies
increase daily so individuals are Fix the agreement mistake
energy
inforce
to use power which Correct your spelling
forced
lead
to harm Change the verb form
leads
environment
. Change preposition
to environment
For instance
, the number of manufacturing cars increase
and it Change the verb form
increases
depend
on fuel which is not Change the verb form
depends
eco friendly
. Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
Therefore
, it seems logical that
On the other hand
, there are possible solutions for this
issue firstly
, provide individuals with knowledge related to this
topic and if citizens know the damage that done
because of their behaviour in using power they will enhance their behaviour.Add a missing verb
is done
For example
, create a program explains
the expected damage and how it will Wrong verb form
explaining
affects
the Change the verb form
affect
live
of all creatures.Replace the word
lives
In addition
, governments need to make rules in
enhance Change preposition
to
energies
Fix the agreement mistake
energy
consuming
and if citizens refuse the rule they should pay a tax for overuse. Replace the word
consumption
Thus
people will be encouraged in protecting the lands.
To sum up
, although
there are causes for harming environment
Correct article usage
the environment
likewise
less in backgrounds about the topic and limited in economy friendly services but government lowe and sepread
awareness are some suggestions to solve the problem .Correct your spelling
spread
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