scientist have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and we must limit use of energy diskpart warning many people do not do this what are the reasons for that and how people can encourage in protecting the environment?

In
last
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tow
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two
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or three
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scientists
ask
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to preserve the environment by energy use limitations.
However
, some people refuse
this
and the resources
is
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lack in awareness and lack in economic friendly powers.
While
the possible solutions are
develope
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developed
in awareness and government rules.
To begin
with,
earth
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the earth
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is suffering from the huge use of power
due to
the limited in
this
issue knowledge.
In other words
, individuals
not
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are not
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aware of the amount of damage they
done
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have done
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in environments
such
as air pollution and Marine pollution.
Moreover
, the number of services and facilities that depend on
energies
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energy
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increase daily so individuals are
inforce
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forced
to use power which
lead
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to harm
environment
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to environment
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.
For instance
, the number of manufacturing cars
increase
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and it
depend
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on fuel which is not
eco friendly
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eco-friendly
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.
Therefore
, it seems logical that
On the other hand
, there are possible solutions for
this
issue
firstly
, provide individuals with knowledge related to
this
topic and if citizens know the damage that
done
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is done
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because of their behaviour in using power they will enhance their behaviour.
For example
, create a program
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the expected damage and how it will
affects
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the
live
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of all creatures.
In addition
, governments need to make rules
in
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to
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enhance
energies
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energy
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consuming
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consumption
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and if citizens refuse the rule they should pay a tax for overuse.
Thus
people will be encouraged in protecting the lands.
To sum up
,
although
there are causes for harming
environment
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the environment
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likewise
less in backgrounds about the topic and limited in economy friendly services but government lowe and
sepread
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spread
awareness are some suggestions to solve the problem .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental conservation
  • sustainable living
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollution
  • ecosystem
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • ozone depletion
  • fossil fuels
  • conservation
  • awareness
  • education
  • resources
  • alternatives
  • selfishness
  • immediate benefits
  • government regulations
  • incentives
  • peer pressure
  • societal norms
  • encourage
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