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Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in the laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use to what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #scientists #animals #laboratory #guarantee #products
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live creations will ensure
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 humanity with more protected goods. I totally agree with that statement because
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 are more above essential rather than
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 humanity will explore new
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animals
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 body, it will
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 go against the law of major countries,
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 the scholars who
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jail without any doubt.
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 which quantity of them decreasing each year, the vast majority of
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 are far more than humans.
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humanity from
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animals
 will provide the provide more
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valuable
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 of illnesses regardless of
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human's
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physicis
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.The scientists will dive deeper and execute numerous
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experiments
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similar cell systems or in general have the same genoms
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 humans which
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positve
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further
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 or safety of good issues. In conclusion, I totally agree that some
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animals
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human related
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • guarantee
  • safe
  • human use
  • scientists
  • experimenting
  • laboratory
  • animal testing
  • valuable information
  • alternative methods
  • equally effective
  • product safety
  • ethical concerns
  • cruel
  • inhumane
  • technologies
  • advancements
  • research
  • reduce
  • replace
  • regulations
  • guidelines
  • ethical treatment
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