The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar graph sketches out the final report of
coffee
and tea
in five Australian cities
in which they analyzed the buying and drinking capacities of the individuals.
Overall
, it can clearly be observed that in all cities
, people
went to café’s
more frequently to drink Unnecessary verb
café
coffee
or tea
. Moreover
, the only exception to this
chart was the fresh coffee
which declined as compared to others.
In three cities
, people
went to the cafes to drink coffee
or tea
in the previous four weeks, around 64 % in Melbourne, which was the highest rate, 63% in Hobart and 61% in Sydney. On the other hand
, instant coffee
was more preferred in Hobart which was 54 % as compared to others. However
, People
were less interested in fresh coffee
to buy in Hobart instead
of Sydney and Melbourne where the demand was higher.
In Adelaide, instant coffee
and people
who prefer to go into
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to
the
cafes were approximately Correct article usage
apply
same
which was around 50 %. Correct article usage
the same
But
, the percentage of fresh Correct word choice
However
coffee
were
low and stood at around 34 %. Change the verb form
was
In contrast
, Brisbane was in high demand in both categories like
Change preposition
apply
mostly
Correct your spelling
most
people
travelled towards the cafes to drink coffee
and tea
around 56% and bought instant coffee
53%. Similarly
, the
fresh Correct article usage
apply
coffee
was also
the lowest in Brisbane and which
other Correct pronoun usage
apply
cities
also
experienced dip
in Add an article
a dip
this
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