The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar chart illustrates the data on the ratio of arriving on actual and targeted
time
of services; however
, the second chart shows the figures for complaints per a thousand passenger's
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passengers
travels
for a transportation business between 1999 and 2004.
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travelling
Overall
, while
the percentages of targeted time
of arrivals
exhibited a downward trend, the figures for complaints from passengers
escalated from 1999 to 2003. On the other hand
, actual
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the actual
time
of arrivals
were fluctuated
throughout the period.
The company's Change to the active voice
fluctuated
arrivals
on targeted time
was 86% in 1999 and 2000 before declining to 85% in 2001 and 2002. In 2003, it experienced a
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an
unsignificant
decrease of 0.5%. Correct your spelling
insignificant
On the contrary
, the ratio actual time
on arrivals
was 85% which hitting a bottom of 82% in 2000 before escalating back to below 85% in 2001. Then
, it fluctuated at around 85-84% untill
the end of the period.
In terms of the number of passenger complaints, there was a reverse correlation between the figures and the targeted Correct your spelling
until
arrivals
on time
of the company. It was starting
escalating at nearly 70% of Wrong verb form
started
passengers
which increased to 100 passengers
per thousand in 2000. After a slight drop in 2001, it rocketed to over 100 and 120 passengers
per thousand in 2002 and 2003, respectively.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, arrivals, passengers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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