The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia nad France in 1980 and 2000.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia nad France in 1980 and 2000.
The chart illustrated shares of electricity
production
by fuel source in two countries in 1980 and 2002, measured in
percent
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
both of the countries have made a surged component of electricity by fuel source with the most
production
being coal in
Australia
and
France
;
however
for
France
in 1980
also
mass producing in Natural gas and changed by Nuclear Power in 2000. With the total
production
hundredth of fuel sources, half is coal made it to the top in
Australia
in 1980
together with
France
which has 90 units where 25% spent on coal and a quarter on Natural Gas.
However
, when the coal manufactured in
Australia
escalated to 130%,
production
in coal had dropped by a quarter and plummeted tremendously to 2% in
France
.
Nevertheless
, Nuclear Power produced nearly a sixth and dramatically rose to 126
percent
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in
France
.
On the other hand
,
Australia
did not produce any of it.
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