The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph
provide
information about the quantities of acceptable transported in British from 1974 to 2002 by road, water, rail, and pipeline, measured in Change the verb form
provides
tonnes
.
Overall
, all of the three modes of transport experienced rises, there were level off in the remaining one. Moreover
, highway
Fix the agreement mistake
highways
contribute
the largest Wrong verb form
contributed
tonnes
of good evaluation whereas
conduit had the smallest proportion.
Analysis of roadway accounted for the most significant ratio of satisfactory transported between 1974 and 2002 reaching well below a hundredth million tonnes
after dropped in around 1990 and escalated enormously by nearly 1994. In addition
, subway
Correct article usage
the subway
accomplished surging
dramatically to well beyond 40 Wrong verb form
surged
following
Verb problem
apply
plummeted
by roughly 1990.
Wrong verb form
plummeting
However
, the water conveying experienced intersect with water transport by 40 tonnes
at around 1978 and visibly stabilise before reached peak by 2002. Lastly
, the good review of pipeline transportation had risen minimally well under 20 tonnes
by roughly 1990 to 1994 before jumping to well below 20 by 2002.Submitted by heyyo
on
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