The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how the cutting tools advanced in the Stone Age between 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago.

Overall

it is clear that

tool

is sharper and more regularly shaped than the earlier one. Over a period of 0.6 million years, the cutting

tool

also

increased in size and effectiveness.

To begin

with, the front view depicts that the edges of

tool

A are rough, revealing its

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earlier stage of development.

Whereas

tool

A is comparatively primitive,

therefore

, the smooth edges of

tool

are clearly more effective as a cutting instrument.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, one of the main differences between the tools is shown in the side view of

diagram

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While

tool

A is irregular, in

constract

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contract

contrast

tool

has a regular, flattened shape. The sharp edge of

tool

is designed for cutting

object

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cleanly and easily.

Finally

, the back view shows most clearly that

tool

A is not only rougher

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but is

also

smaller than

tool

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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts, while boys like science. what are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

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Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.