The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how the cutting tools advanced in the Stone Age between 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago.

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it is clear that

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is sharper and more regularly shaped than the earlier one. Over a period of 0.6 million years, the cutting

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also

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increased in size and effectiveness.

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with, the front view depicts that the edges of

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A are rough, revealing its

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earlier stage of development.

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A is comparatively primitive,

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, the smooth edges of

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are clearly more effective as a cutting instrument.

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, one of the main differences between the tools is shown in the side view of

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A is irregular, in

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contrast

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has a regular, flattened shape. The sharp edge of

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is designed for cutting

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cleanly and easily.

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, the back view shows most clearly that

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A is not only rougher

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but is

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smaller than

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