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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The issue of
languages
 has been debated in recent years. The
language
 is gradually disappearing. Some people claim that it is not essential to care about
this
. It would be easier if there were few
languages
 ​​in the
world
. In my opinion, I disagree and explain in
this
 essay. On the one hand, It can be said that losing
language
 means losing national identity,
moreover
 leading to loss of
country
. Since each
country
 will have a signature
language
 it will help many people in the
world
, identify it more easily. It is necessary to maintain the diversity of the
world
's
languages
 since each
language
 represents the identity of a community.
For example
, Vietnam was colonized for 1,000 years by some countries around the
world
 but still did not lose its
country
 because it still had the
language
.
On the other hand
, the lack of
language
 is only advantageous at
first,
but will certainly cause humanity to lose intelligence later on.
Furthermore
, many of the traditional myths are written or documented in minority
languages
, and if they die out,
then
 the culture would
also
 be lost.
For instance
, several Vietnamese literature, songs, and poems are narrated only in our local
language
.
This
 is the way can conserve many kinds of traditions. In conclusion,
language
 was indebted when it was convenient at the time.
However
, it can cause the loss of cultural identity and customs of a
country
 in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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