This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram visualizes how
plastic
bottles
are recycled and used to create different products.
This
cycle process can be divided into three main stages: collecting and sorting, compressing and crushing, and converting raw
plastic
pellets into different end products.
Initially
, garbage trucks collect the
plastic
waste
materials
from dust bins.
Then
these are transported to recycling
centers
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, where waste is sorted by humans. During the sorting, only
plastic
bottles
are collected for
further
processing.
After
this
stage, the
bottles
are compressed into large blocks, and
then
they are crushed using machines. Crushed plastics, which are the output after crushing, are directly put into washing tanks.
Next,
these washed plastics are put into machines in order to produce
plastic
pellets.
After
this
,
plastic
pellets are heated to create raw
materials
. Meanwhile, these raw
materials
are stocked until they are used for different product creations.
Finally
, these raw
materials
will be used for making products
such
as
bottles
, t-shirts, bags, pencils, or lunch boxes.
This
process
then
repeats itself continuously.
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