This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram visualizes how
plastic
bottles
are recycled and used to create different products. This
cycle process can be divided into three main stages: collecting and sorting, compressing and crushing, and converting raw plastic
pellets into different end products.
Initially
, garbage trucks collect the plastic
waste materials
from dust bins. Then
these are transported to recycling centers
, where waste is sorted by humans. During the sorting, only Change the spelling
centres
plastic
bottles
are collected for further
processing. After
this
stage, the bottles
are compressed into large blocks, and then
they are crushed using machines. Crushed plastics, which are the output after crushing, are directly put into washing tanks.
Next,
these washed plastics are put into machines in order to produce plastic
pellets. After
this
, plastic
pellets are heated to create raw materials
. Meanwhile, these raw materials
are stocked until they are used for different product creations. Finally
, these raw materials
will be used for making products such
as bottles
, t-shirts, bags, pencils, or lunch boxes. This
process then
repeats itself continuously.Submitted by rsnirma on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, materials with synonyms.
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