The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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this
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diagram introduces the process of how instant
noodles
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are manufactured.
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, there are eight steps, which are made from raw flour to cups of instant
noodle
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noodles
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.
The first
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step
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is to take the flour from storage
slios
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slips
by truck.
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put it into mixer machines where flour will be mixed with water and oil. In
third
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step
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step,
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the mix goes through the dough sheets to become flat. Next rough, mixed was sliced to
noodles
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. In the fifth
step
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,
noodles
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formed into discs, and
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they are dried and dried in the next
step
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. After that fried
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are placed in cups with vegetables
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and
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spices. And
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finally
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finally,
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way cups of
noodles
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were
labeled
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and sealed.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • rolled out
  • thin strips
  • steaming process
  • partially cooked
  • fried
  • dehydrating
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • quality control
  • standards
  • flavoring powder
  • sauce packet
  • traditional pasta
  • dehydration
  • instant cooking
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