Some people view conflict between teenagers and parents as a necessary part of growing up, while others view it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Other folks perceive disagreement between teenagers and parents as a required part of growing up,
while
some see it as something not good and should be skipped.Below I will tackle both sides elaborating how healthy it is for conflict view within families to a certain extent.
Firstly
, exchange
of different sides is healthy in any form of relationship ,in Correct article usage
the exchange
this
case
children and parents should normalise situations like Add a comma
case,
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.I once read a book by one of Add an article
the pestigious
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authors about relationships.It gave an example that adults are responsible Correct your spelling
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for
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their young ones.As so they should have healthy disagreements .Change the spelling
moulding
This
will help both parties to respect each other's views and opinion
.He goes on to say Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
however
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, however
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that this
this
different views should not Correct determiner usage
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be belittle
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to
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by
the
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apply
other
or offending .In my own opinion,my interpretation was that during Fix the agreement mistake
others
this
small talks ,Correct determiner usage
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is interaction ,quality time and education involved regarding a certain subject.Correct pronoun usage
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Furthermore
by respecting both views ,we learn that being older does not Add a comma
Furthermore,
gurantee
knowing everything or always right and the opposite.
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guarantee
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,to a lesser extent
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extent,
this
type of discussions
should be avoided as Fix the agreement mistake
discussion
their
will end up becoming a habit resulting in verbal Correct pronoun usage
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sometimes leading to physical Fix the agreement mistake
fights
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.My Uncle and his family moved abroad when Fix the agreement mistake
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was young .Everyone in my family used to admire how educated he was and how he was so close to his kids.They would talk about everything under the sun.One day Uncle had an emergency and he was admitted Change the capitalization
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at
the Intensive Care Unit.He had been pushed down Change preposition
to
fcrom
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from
third
floor in his house by his son Tayana.They had been discussing Change the article
the third
about
how Tawana should stop Remove the preposition
apply
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different girls to the house.What had started as discussed,turned into an argument Correct your spelling
inviting
then
got physical.In my Correct word choice
and then
view
Uncle failed to set boundaries with his son and the end was Add a comma
view,
tragedy
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a tragedy
end
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end,
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line
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a line
the
be crossed that way relationships are Correct article usage
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mantained
.
To sum it upCorrect your spelling
maintained
all
,It is Correct determiner usage
apply
alright
for families to have Replace the word
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different
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a different
perspective
on certain topics.Fix the agreement mistake
perspectives
This
interaction help
to bring the family closer and built communication skills .At the same time,freedom of expression should be limited so that respect is Wrong verb form
helped
mantained
as shown above.Correct your spelling
maintained
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