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The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
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The provided chart illustrates the
accommodation
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 preferences of
British
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travelers
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 in 2010 when visiting four different
countries
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. The data is analyzed to highlight the
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 types with the highest and lowest percentages of usage. In summary, it is evident that
hotels
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 were the most
favored
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 choice for
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 among
British
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travelers
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 in all four
countries
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,
while
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 camping and caravanning were the least popular options. On the one hand,
hotels
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 were the dominant choice in each of the
countries
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, with an
overall
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 average of 50%. England stands out as the highest, with 55% of
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travelers
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 opting for
hotels
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while
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 Northern Ireland recorded the lowest hotel usage at 45%.
On the other hand
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, caravanning and camping were significantly less preferred. Caravanning had the lowest average usage in the UK and Wales, with only 7% of
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travelers
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 selecting
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 option.
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, it was relatively more popular in Northern Ireland, making up 31% of accommodations. Camping was the least
favored
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 in Scotland and Northern Ireland, both
countries
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 recording an average of 8.5%. In conclusion,
hotels
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 were the overwhelmingly preferred choice for
British
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 tourists visiting these four
countries
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 in 2010. Camping and caravanning,
on the other hand
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, were chosen by a significantly smaller proportion of
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travelers
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.
This
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 data reveals distinct preferences among
British
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 tourists when it comes to
accommodation
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 options.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation, british, travelers, countries, hotels with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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