What are advantage and disadvantages of immigration?

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Nowadays it is a
following
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trend
of moving
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from one place to another. Many
people
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strive to change their location to another one. The essay will show
pros
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the pros
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and cons of
immigration
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.
To begin
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with,
immigration
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is a tendency prevailing in countries with a low level of life.
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, habitats begin to move to another part of the world in
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of earning more money, getting better medicine,
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, so it would be reasonable for them to change the place where they live to another. They can get more opportunities if they habitat in a new spot.
Secondly
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, many
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do not have a chance to stay in their deposit
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a war. As an example, the military operation in Ukraine does not allow residents to continue living in their
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so they have to immigrate to stay alive.
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,
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has a lot of disadvantages. First of all, it leads to a high rate of crime. Many statistics show that places full of immigrants suffer from violence and robbery. It is happening because
people
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of different nations, cultures, and traditions are
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,
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, it leads to conflicts. What is more, local
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cannot find suitable places for their children
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study because schools, universities and other
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institutions are replete with foreigners. A similar example is a high rate of employment. Many companies are full of
people
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.
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, lack of social institutions is a usual problem in countries with many immigrants.
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all the above,
immigration
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can be as positive as negative. In my opinion, the flows are prevailing.
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