In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Technology evolves day by day and
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that
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many advanced features are
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adding
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to
vehicles
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continuously. It predicts that in future there will be
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vehicles
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as cars, buses and trucks for
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transport.
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, there can be several vital drawbacks and in
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essay; I will state that how advantages do not outweigh its disadvantages.
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,
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of artificial intelligence with robotics results
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driverless
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vehicles
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. Most of these
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need continuous internet connection in order to analyze the surrounding environment and take the necessary
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.
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there is a high probability of malfunctioning these
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due to
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unavoidable circumstances. As an example, during a journey if the vehicle
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internet or the signal it
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able to decide what to do next because it fully depends on the
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data.
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of that,
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will lead to fatal accidents sometimes.
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,
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the
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nature, many people
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as
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will
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their jobs.
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, many individuals and families will
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their income and
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, it will lead to
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in social issues
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as homelessness or robberies.
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, using a
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vehicle will help people to take some leisure time rather than worrying about the
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and driving.
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to that, less
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is required where busy people do not have to worry about the
drivers
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or replacements.
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, many companies do not have to pay salaries with overtime payments for their
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. As an example, many package delivery companies
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as UPS
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into
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robotic
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for their package deliveries.
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a
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conclusion,
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driverless
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vehicles
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support
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and companies in different ways; the benefits do not outweigh the drawbacks because human capacities
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as immediate
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decision-making
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and responding
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are
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not possible in robots.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • human error
  • cybersecurity threats
  • vulnerable to hacking
  • traffic congestion
  • smooth, continuous flow
  • transportation systems
  • economic impact
  • unemployment rates
  • economic instability
  • ethical dilemmas
  • programming
  • split-second decisions
  • moral responsibility
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