Many cannot speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree?

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The fear of public speaking is so prevalent that more
people
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of that than they are scared of death. Since many cannot speak fluently and coherently in public, it is argued that pupils
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get public presentation education from
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years. I agree with the notion, simply because of two main reasons.
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there are instances where a
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unwantedly is needed to speak in
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of a large audience, and
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this
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skill is best taught
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younger ages. We shall be able to speak a few words, or even half an hour, in
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of a group of
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, even if we do not want to. There are collective situations where a
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has something to say
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but unfortunately is unable to express himself or herself. Imagine a group meeting of parents as an example. In
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cases, there are grown men and women who are not trained enough to express their thoughts, and
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miss the chance of participating in the discussion. In
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example, individuals with better public speaking
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, even with ill
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, get all the
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. So, I think we need to be prepared for
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unintentional circumstances. Public speaking fear shall not grow and get firm into a
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's personality. It is best to prevent it in school ages. In fact, high school students' personalities are not rigid enough to reject change. Teachers and mentors can easily make them participate in public events
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speak in
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of their peers and encourage them to embrace their weaknesses.
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, it is better for a teenager to find out about what might prevent him or her from giving a flawless speech to a large number of
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than a fully grown
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Iranian
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education system, unfortunately, is a negative example. In Iran, students are not generally encouraged to nurture their public speaking mentality. So, it is vital for teenagers to gain
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skill when they are still young enough to change. In conclusion, speaking in
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of
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, especially when a large group of audience is involved, is like an abyss for most
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the
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people
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, so it is important to train every student from
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years.
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public speaking cannot be avoided, and
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the younger a
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, the easier the personality changes.
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