23.The chart below shows spending on health among three different countries between 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph displays the money used in health in
Japan
, Italy and France
from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, all three countries increased their spending over the years
, while
Japan
had a waste of many times greater than any other country in all five
years
. The other significant feature of this
graph is that France
has risen sharply its value in the last
5 years
.
Japan
had a waste of 8 billion
dollars in 1990 double that of Italy in second place, which only had a waste of just under $4 billion
. Italy’s value was twice as much as the lowest in 1990, namely France
, which only had a GDP of just $2 billion
. In 1995 Japan
grew by $1 billion
, while
Italy doubled in five
years
and France
climbed to just above $3 billion
.
Japan
increased its payout to approximately $13 billion
in 2000, but Italy and France
dropped moderately to $6 billion
and $2 billion
respectively. In the next five
years
, Japan
decreased modestly to $12 billion
, Italy jumped to $9 billion
and France
remained stable. In the last
year of the period Japan
rocketed by $2 billion
compared to 2005, Italy rose significantly to $10 billion
, finally
, France
is five
times greater than in 2005.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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