23.The chart below shows spending on health among three different countries between 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

23.The chart below shows spending on health among three different countries between 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph displays the money used in health in
Japan
, Italy and
France
from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, all three countries increased their spending over the
years
,
while
Japan
had a waste of many times greater than any other country in all
five
years
. The other significant feature of
this
graph is that
France
has risen sharply its value in the
last
5
years
.
Japan
had a waste of 8
billion
dollars in 1990 double that of Italy in second place, which only had a waste of just under $4
billion
. Italy’s value was twice as much as the lowest in 1990, namely
France
, which only had a GDP of just $2
billion
. In 1995
Japan
grew by $1
billion
,
while
Italy doubled in
five
years
and
France
climbed to just above $3
billion
.
Japan
increased its payout to approximately $13
billion
in 2000, but Italy and
France
dropped moderately to $6
billion
and $2
billion
respectively. In the next
five
years
,
Japan
decreased modestly to $12
billion
, Italy jumped to $9
billion
and
France
remained stable. In the
last
year of the period
Japan
rocketed by $2
billion
compared to 2005, Italy rose significantly to $10
billion
,
finally
,
France
is
five
times greater than in 2005.
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