Results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The chart illustrates five Australian cities that were surveyed by researchers about
people
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’s habits for drinking and buying
coffee
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and
tea
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.
Overall
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, the graph shows different habits in five cities in Australia that can appear the most in every single city
people
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went to
cafe
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a cafe
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for
coffee
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or
tea
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in
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last
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the last
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4 weeks except Adelaide city which has the most bought instant
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in
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4 weeks.
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, five cities in Australia’s graph
exhibit
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the lowest
people
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habits is bought fresh
coffee
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in
last
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4 weeks. As is presented in
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graph
people
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went
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who went
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to cafe for
coffee
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or
tea
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has
average
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an average
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around
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45-65%. Mostly
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they
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prefer to
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go to
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cafe
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cafes
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at
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Melbourne and Hobart.
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likewise
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people
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who bought fresh
tea
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has
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minimum
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a minimum
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around
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35%
at
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Brisbane.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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