The given maps present the amount of changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the nowadays.

The given maps present the amount of changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the nowadays.
The given maps present the amount of changes in the
town
of Denham from 1986 to the nowadays.
Overall
,
a
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the
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differences
of
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between
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the two maps
reveals
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a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban area. As shown in the illustrations in the
town
there were many places where cows were grazed, but during the period the
town
experienced a number of of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the farmlands north and south of the
town
were cleared, with all the shops along the road being knocked down to make
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way
to
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for to
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post office. As is presented in the maps a number of the houses rised, were built along the all road. The large houses and gardens were cleared and
instead
of them, was built the retirement home in
east
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the east
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of the
town
.
Furthermore
, the development of the city has
also
affected the school,
increased
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in
area
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the area
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. Only
a
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the
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road to the bridge remained unchanged.
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