some people think that it is beneficial to travel abroad, but others think it is unnecessary because we have the Internet and TV. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One may argue that travelling abroad benefits themselves. The reasons may be listed as follows.
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travelling abroad enables travellers
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and appreciate the landscapes and nature in person.
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what is more important is that
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can understand the culture of that country, namely the customs,
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's identities,
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's ideology and stuff, which is certainly good for
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in nowadays gobalizationalized context.
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, some may disagree with the aforementioned
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because they think media is sufficient enough. For one thing, there are various photos and documentaries about different places
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the world. For another, nowadays we have a lot of
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document their
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by making vlogs and so on, making the audience experience their life visually and verbally. From my perspective, each point of view has its value.
Neverthless
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, I prefer the former opinion.
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, everyone's perception is different. One may gain his or her own distinctive feelings
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he or
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get
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into the place.
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, though social media makes our
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more
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, it is convinced that the information it
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is not absolutely real.
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, the better way
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correct understanding should be getting in touch
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the destinations by oneself.
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but not least,
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the differences among countries' soft power,
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may not know every country comprehensively online,
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going abroad will not make
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obstacle.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • opportunity
  • exposure
  • cultural diversity
  • explore
  • immersive experience
  • language proficiency
  • intercultural communication
  • networking
  • global perspective
  • adaptability
  • experience new things
  • broaden horizons
  • virtual resources
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • information overload
  • virtual reality
  • face-to-face interaction
  • personal connections
  • empathy
  • appreciation
  • unique
  • memorable
  • transformative
  • educational
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