Plastic bags, plastic bottles, plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damade does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Nowadays, most of the scientists’ research
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revealed that our
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temperature rapidly
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because of the amount of trash and
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pollution,
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scientist
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attempt
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to
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our society. On one hand, the researcher acknowledges that the
plastic
industry has an important influence on
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global warming,
hence
, they attempt to spread
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reason to
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society so that individuals can realize about
plastic
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issue
. The researcher
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that
plastic
can damage our environment because the production process releases the
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that
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to
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not only individual’s health but
also
the environment. For
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instance,
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marine animals have been damaged by
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plastic
litter because it struck in animal respiratory system,
therefore
, the rates of death
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living
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have
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increased in
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recent years.
On the other hand
, they make an effort to acknowledge
this
issue
to the government,
hence
, they cooperate with the academician to discover the solution. In
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recent years, many
of
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the
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countries
campaign
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that using cloth
bag
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instead
of
plastic
bag
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is the easiest solution because
this
can revive our environment and decrease the amount of trash per
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year.
Furthermore
, the government publicly says that our population have to
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with the separating trash process because our litter not only can both
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and provide the profession and income to individual
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don’t have stable income yet. In conclusion,
this
issue
has
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damaged the
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for a decade and many
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of the government
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an effort to resolve
this
,
conversely
, individuals have to cooperate with the
officer
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too because
this
is the responsibility of all of the population,
therefore
, if the existence of cooperation appears
this
issue
definitely can be solved.
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