Plastic bags, plastic bottles, plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damade does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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our society. On one hand, the researcher acknowledges that the

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industry has an important influence on

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global warming,

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that

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can damage our environment because the production process releases the

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not only individual’s health but

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the environment. For

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marine animals have been damaged by

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litter because it struck in animal respiratory system,

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, the rates of death

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recent years.

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that using cloth

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is the easiest solution because

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can revive our environment and decrease the amount of trash per

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with the separating trash process because our litter not only can both

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and provide the profession and income to individual

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don’t have stable income yet. In conclusion,

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of the government

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too because

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is the responsibility of all of the population,

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definitely can be solved.