The chart below shows the results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK in 2007.
The pie chart
illustates
the reasons for Correct your spelling
illustrates
take
leave Change the verb form
taking
on
schools in the UK in 2007. The figures measure in per cent.
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from
Overall
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although
both parents working Linking Words
were
the main reason, Upbringing was the least.
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was
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to
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for
children's
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children
attend
their Wrong verb form
attending
class
and Lack of School Fix the agreement mistake
classes
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discipline
is
the second. The former accounted Wrong verb form
was
40
and the Change preposition
for 40
later
was 25 per cent. Both peer group pressure and bullying were exactly Correct your spelling
latter
same
at 15 Correct article usage
the same
while
upbringing Linking Words
was
accounted for 5. It was exactly Unnecessary verb
apply
one third
of bullying and peer group pressure.Add a hyphen
one-third
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