The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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the global willingness to consume product from insects and the
amount
of certain foods available at the market. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Mexico is the country that consume the highest
amount
of
those kind
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of eatable as compared to any
disticnt
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distinct
nation
. In Mexico,
people
eating
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insect products account for 71%. In
this
nation
percentage of humans who willingly
eats
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them
are
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more than the percentage who do not want to eat insects.
This
nation
is followed by Peru,
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for 58%, and the willingness is similar to Mexico. 56% of men and women
of
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the
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Thailand consume these products and
people
willingly eating are more than
people
who are eating
unwillingy
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unwillingly
unwilling
. Brazil and China have
intermediate
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amount
of
people
eating insects product, amounting
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45% and 44% respectively. South Africa is
also
an intermediate insect consumer
nation
with 39%, in which
people
who are unwilling to eat these are of greater
amount
then
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willingly eating
people
. Japan have the least
amount
of human beings who eat
these product
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,
that is
only 21%.
While
Russia
have
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32%, India and Spain have similar digits of consumers, which is 33% and The USA have 35%.
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Kingdom
have
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36% of consumers for insect products. In all these nations,
population
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the population
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who are eating it
unwilling
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is less than
people
who are eating willingly.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, nation, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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