The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram delineates the information in which
oil
is expected to be used for the production of aromatic
water
, that can be treated as
the
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apply
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perfume. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that perfume
prduction
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production
involves ten steps, in which oils
is
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are
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transported to different machinery every time.
Initially
, the
water
in a
chanber
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chamber
is heated with the help of fire and
get
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gets
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converted to
steam
.
This
steam
with the help of the pipeline moves to a different container, containing the scented plants. When
steam
passses
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passes
these plants, it forms
steam
in
addtion
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addition
with
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to
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oil
vapours.
This
mixture is
then
passed through
container
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a container
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, known as
condenser
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a condenser
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.
This
condenser
have
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has
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an inlet for cold
water
and two
outlet
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outlets
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, one of which is for hot
water
and another one is for
mixture
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a mixture
the mixture
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of
water
and essential
oil
.
This
mixture is
then
transferred to an operator, known as
separator
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a separator
the separator
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.
This
separator, help to separate distinct material,
such
as essential
oil
and hydrolate.
This
hydrolat is an aromatic
water
which is released by an outlet present in the
equipement
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equipment
.
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