the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000
The line graph illustrates the millions of public transport users in the UK over the period of the past 60 years i.e., 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, the graph shows an increase for trains
and cars but a steady decline for buses.
In 1970, cars had the highest number of commuters (5 million
) and remained steady until 1980. It accelerated sharply to 7 million
in 1990 and continued to grow since then
. Consequently
, throughout the entire period, cars remained as
the top choice of transport in the UK and by 2030, it is estimated to reach 9 Change preposition
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million
passengers.
Although
trains
held the lowest number of users in 1970 with only 2 million
, it gradually rose to 3 million
in 2000. Also
, it remained constant for the next decade but increased rapidly to just over 5 million
consumers by 2030. In contrast
, buses started at a higher value than trains
with 4 million
commuters but failed to stay popular in comparison to trains
. Finally
, the numbers gradually decreased over the decades to the lowest value being just under 3 million
by 2030.Submitted by Mazam on
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