in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these vlews and give your own opinion.
Citizens of some countries consider it should spend a large number of money on building
high speed
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high-speed
railways
between cities
, Correct word choice
while other
other
think the money should Fix the agreement mistake
others
spend
on improving the existing public transportation systems. Some may say the Wrong verb form
be spent
high speed
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high-speed
rail
Correct your spelling
railway
way
is the most efficient way
to get to another city, some says
it is too costly.
To start with, Change the verb form
say
Correct article usage
the high
high speed
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high-speed
rail
Correct your spelling
railway
way
is the best option for traveling
between Change the spelling
travelling
cities
in
Change preposition
at
certain
Correct article usage
a certain
distance
. The older public transportation options like Fix the agreement mistake
distances
bus
or Fix the agreement mistake
buses
normal speed
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normal-speed
railways
are relatively low compare
to the high-speed Wrong verb form
compared
railways
, by the high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
rail
Correct your spelling
railway
way
, people
can travel between cities
more efficiently. Second,
with a new option for people
to travel around, fewer people
will choose to drive their own car for longer distance
, Fix the agreement mistake
distances
this
may help reducing
the carbon dioxide that emits Wrong verb form
reduce
to
the airChange preposition
into
,
and eventually slows the speed of global warming.
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apply
However
, building new
Add an article
a new
railway
for high speed
trains is very costly Add a hyphen
high-speed
compare
to improving existing public transportation options. The cost of building Wrong verb form
compared
Correct article usage
a high
high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
railway
may not paid
off, so it may make government waste money on Wrong verb form
pay
this
expensive project of building a high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
railway
. Moreover
, the high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
railway
may not as
Add a missing verb
be as
convenience
as Replace the word
convenient
people
expected. In some cities
, it is hard to find a perfect area to build a new train station, so the new railway
system will become inconvenience
.
Replace the word
inconvenient
To sum up
, high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
railways
is
a faster Correct subject-verb agreement
are
way
to travel between cities
, and it is good for slow
down the speed of global warming. Wrong verb form
slowing
However
, it is very costly, and sometimes hard to find a suitable place to build a new train station for it. In my opinion, I think building a new high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
railway
system is a better option.Submitted by papaya on
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