You are planning a two-week vacation, and need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neigbour. In your letter: tell your neighbour that you are going away ask your neighbour to take care of your house for you explain what task you would like your neighbour to do

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Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing to request you to look after my home for

few

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days as I will be going on holiday next week. I will

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the spare set of keys

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the home to you

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going away.

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, I planned a vacation of a couple of weeks starting from 29th of October and I will be

returing

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returning

around 13th of November. Meanwhile, I will be available over

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phone in case of urgency. I would appreciate

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you could help me with taking care of my house during the mentioned period. As

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you are the only helpful person living in my neighbourhood, I am requesting you to do some minor chores at

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home in my absence. Specifically, these tasks are to feed my pet fish daily by using the food container near the fish tank, to water the outdoor plants twice a week and to check my mailbox for urgent letters. Currently, I am expecting a joining letter from Microsoft company, so I would like to request you to call me after seeing

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in my letterbox. I look forward to hearing a positive reply from you. Yours sincerely, Ravindra Rajole

ravirajoleWed Oct 18 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

198 words

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