The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of making a
violoinby
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violin by
violin
hand.
Overall
,
Violin
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the Violin
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is made by hand through different
parts
and
througfor
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throughout
h
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the
process
.
Violin
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The violin
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is been structured beautifully. The
process
starts with
the
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cutting the wood into
the
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a
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thin piece using
saw
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a saw
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. The wood is been divided into two
parts
they
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the
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are
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back and
front
part
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parts
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. By using the
front
part
F-hole is been
desgined
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designed
. The fourth
process
by using the
front
part
making
bass
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a bass
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bar in
te
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the
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front
part
.
Next,
handle
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the handle
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of
violin
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the violin
a violin
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is made with the heating
the
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apply
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tool, shaped rib and two unshaped rib strips are used. With the help of glue both the
parts
are fixed and ribs are
also
used for fixing
body
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the body
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of the
violin
.
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the handle is made the scroll and for safety handling neck is fixed and
body
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the body
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of
violin
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the violin
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is ready. The
parts
are fixed properly and the
violin
is assembled properly. The additional
parts
are given for fixing in
violin
if needed. They
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the
violin
to make it neat and clean. The
last
stage is
vilion
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vision
pavilion
is furnished fully with the
process
tools
requried
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required
these are the eight
process
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processes
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to complete
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the vilion
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vilion
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vision
by hand.
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