The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about changes
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
incidents
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
burglary,
car
theft and
robbery
in the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
of
Newport
city
Capitalize word
City
show examples
within nine
years
, from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, the
number
of situations in
car
theft and
robbery
had the same
number
of
incidents
throughout nine
years
,
however
, the
number
of
incidents
in burglary decreased from 2003 to 2012 in
Newport
city
. On the one hand,the
number
of
incidents
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
car
theft and
robbery
crimes had the same
number
of
incidents
in 2012 compared to 2003.
Firstly
, the
number
of
car
thefts decreased gradually from 2003 to 2006, reaching its minimum
number
of
incidents
in 2006, 2100
incidents
respectively. Beginning from 2006 till 2012 it fluctuated,
however
, the
number
of
incidents
became more popular and returned to the same
number
of
incidents
in 2012, about 2800
incidents
.
Secondly
, the
number
of
incidents
of
robbery
increased and reached its peak in 2005, counting approximately 800
incidents
.
Netx
Correct your spelling
Next
seven
years
, the
number
of
incidents
fluctuated and returned to the same
number
of
incidents
as
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
in 2003,
estimating
Wrong verb form
estimated
show examples
around 600
incidents
in the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
of
Newport
city
Capitalize word
City
show examples
.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
burglaries
reached its peak in 2004, counting about 3700
incidents
, beginning from 2003. Next four
years
, the
number
of
burglaries
changed dramatically, decreasing the statistics of
burglaries
. In 2008, the
number
of
burglaries
reached its minimum
number
of
incidents
, approximately 1300
incidents
, and within the next four
years
Add a comma
years,
show examples
it came to 1400
incidents
in the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
of
Newport
city
Capitalize word
City
show examples
.
Submitted by aibiikenurlanova414 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents, car, robbery, newport, city, years, number, burglaries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 16 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
What to do next:
Look at other essays: