The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about changes
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incidents
in
burglary, Change preposition
of
car
theft and robbery
in the center
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centre
Newport
city
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City
years
, from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, the number
of situations in car
theft and robbery
had the same number
of incidents
throughout nine years
, however
, the number
of incidents
in burglary decreased from 2003 to 2012 in Newport
city
.
On the one hand,the number
of incidents
in
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of
car
theft and robbery
crimes had the same number
of incidents
in 2012 compared to 2003. Firstly
, the number
of car
thefts decreased gradually from 2003 to 2006, reaching its minimum number
of incidents
in 2006, 2100 incidents
respectively. Beginning from 2006 till 2012 it fluctuated, however
, the number
of incidents
became more popular and returned to the same number
of incidents
in 2012, about 2800 incidents
. Secondly
, the number
of incidents
of robbery
increased and reached its peak in 2005, counting approximately 800 incidents
. Netx
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Next
years
, the number
of incidents
fluctuated and returned to the same number
of incidents
as was
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incidents
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centre
Newport
city
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On the other hand
, the number
of burglaries
reached its peak in 2004, counting about 3700 incidents
, beginning from 2003. Next four years
, the number
of burglaries
changed dramatically, decreasing the statistics of burglaries
. In 2008, the number
of burglaries
reached its minimum number
of incidents
, approximately 1300 incidents
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Newport
city
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City
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