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The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.

The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.
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The bar chart illustrates
main
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 priorities of
companies
 with company size in the USA in 2016.
Overall
,
companies’
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companies
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 gave
a
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the
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 same outweigh to converting contacts and increasing
number
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a number
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 of leads as a main goal and these goals showed
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a significant
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 gap with others,
however
, when
company
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the company
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have
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 more than 201
employees
, priorities showed more equal distribution. Small size ventures (0 to 25
employees
) give exactly
same
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 importance to converting and
increase
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 the number of contacts with 71% but mid-size
companies
 (26 to 200
employees
)
more
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 focused on to rise of contacts numbers with 79%.
Similarly
, bigger
companies
’ (201 or more
employees
) top priority was similar
as
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 middle and small ventures.
On the other hand
, all
companies
 put reducing the cost of contact acquisition task as
a
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the
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 least important one in
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the different
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 priority
category
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.
Moreover
, generating more revenue and
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taking
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 a return
of
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 investment from marketing activities have significant value for the big
companies
 with 55% and 58% respectively but for the mid
sizes
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 it has equal weight with 47%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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