The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.

The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.
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The bar chart illustrates
main
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the main
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priorities of
companies
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with company size in the USA in 2016.
Overall
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,
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companies’
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companies
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gave
a
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the
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same outweigh to converting contacts and increasing
number
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a number
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of leads as a main goal and these goals showed
significant
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a significant
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gap with others,
however
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, when
company
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the company
a company
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have
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more than 201
employees
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, priorities showed more equal distribution. Small size ventures (0 to 25
employees
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) give exactly
same
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the same
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importance to converting and
increase
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increasing
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the number of contacts with 71% but mid-size
companies
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(26 to 200
employees
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)
more
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are more
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focused on to rise of contacts numbers with 79%.
Similarly
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, bigger
companies
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’ (201 or more
employees
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) top priority was similar
as
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middle and small ventures.
On the other hand
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, all
companies
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put reducing the cost of contact acquisition task as
a
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the
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least important one in
different
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the different
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priority
category
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categories
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.
Moreover
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, generating more revenue and
take
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taking
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a return
of
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on
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investment from marketing activities have significant value for the big
companies
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with 55% and 58% respectively but for the mid
sizes
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it has equal weight with 47%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, employees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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