The chart shows how the number of students at different Canadian universities increased from 2001 to 2006.

chart shows how the number of students at different Canadian universities increased from 2001 to 2006. The most striking is British Columbia and the

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. New Brunswick has higher student growth than Nova Scotia. Not as many graduates in Nova Scotia as them in Manitoba. Manitoba’s numbers

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. Newfoundland and Labrador with Alberta were about the same. And universities with the lowest numbers of students are Quebec and Ontario

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The chart shows how the number of students at different Canadian universities increased from 2001 to 2006.

Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happenung? Is it a positive or negative development?

You found a problem with the item which you bought it online. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter, you should: •describe the item •explain what the issue is •suggest what you expect the manager to do

Fast food is becoming part of life everywhere, negatively affecting our lifestyles and diets. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions. Discuss both sides and then give your own opinion.

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary forgovernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?