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The chart shows how the number of students at different Canadian universities increased from 2001 to 2006.

The chart shows how the number of students at different Canadian universities increased from 2001 to 2006.
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chart shows how the number of students at different Canadian universities increased from 2001 to 2006. The most striking is British Columbia and the
most
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lowest
Ontario
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is Ontario
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. New Brunswick has higher student growth than Nova Scotia. Not as many graduates in Nova Scotia as them in Manitoba. Manitoba’s numbers
is
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are
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 substantially more than
Alvberta
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Alvberta's
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. Newfoundland and Labrador with Alberta were about the same. And universities with the lowest numbers of students are Quebec and Ontario
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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