The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above indicates
proportion
rate of the population aged 65 and over between the years 1940 to 2040 in the Correct article usage
the proportion
USA
, Sweden
and Japan
.
When comparing the data in the graph, it is clear the percentage
of the population aged above 65 years in all 3 countries was below 10% in 1940 and in 2040 the percentage
has increased above 20%.
Furthermore
, Japan
had the lowest percentage
compared to the USA
and Sweden
from 1940 to 2022. However
, the 65 above
Correct word choice
and above
aged
population in Correct word choice
apply
Japan
increased up to 27% whereas
the USA
and Sweden
recorded 23% and 25% in 2040. On the other hand
, even though the USA
Change noun form
USA's
percentage
was higher than that Sweden
from 1940 to 1999, from 2000Change preposition
of Sweden
Change noun form
Sweden's
Sweden
percentage
increased. Overall
it is clear that
over the years USA
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the USA
were
recorded Change the verb form
was
highest
and in the endCorrect article usage
the highest
Capitalize word
Japan
japan
marked the highest percentage
in 2040.Submitted by shazraibrahimphotography2 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, sweden, japan, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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