The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The line graph represents data from a 2008 report about
utilization
of natural Add an article
the utilization
resourcers
in America from 1980 with Correct your spelling
resources
prediction
to 2030.
Correct article usage
a prediction
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
petrol and oil contributed the highest Linking Words
units
, followed by coal and natural gas. Use synonyms
Moreover
, nuclear, solar/windLinking Words
,
and hydropower come up with Remove the comma
apply
lowest
earnings.
Turning to petrol and oil Correct article usage
the lowest
that
started with 35 quadrillion Correct pronoun usage
it
units
and predicted will be rise gradually throughout half a century for well under 50. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Likewise
coal forecast will be Add a comma
Likewise,
escalate
tremendously and Wrong verb form
escalated
also
Linking Words
had
crossed with natural gas by nearly 2015 (just beneath a quarter). Wrong verb form
have
Nonetheless
, nuclear and solar/wind Linking Words
had
intersected Unnecessary verb
apply
at
around 1985 Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
then
Correct word choice
and then
remain
constant before will grow Wrong verb form
remained
slighly
by Correct your spelling
slightly
the
2030.
Even though fracked gas Change the article
apply
appear
in Change the verb form
appears
a well
Correct the article-noun agreement
well units
a well unit
units
, the situation is been Use synonyms
ups
and down and will oscillate by 2030. Hydropower; Replace the word
up
however
Linking Words
kick
off in almost 5 Correct subject-verb agreement
kicks
units
, pass over with nuclear and solar/wind, before Use synonyms
remain
relatively stable for the next Wrong verb form
remaining
semicentury
.Correct your spelling
semi century
semi-century
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Vocabulary: Replace the words units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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