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The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The described picture delineates the information related to the components that
neurons
 contain and the working of
neurons
. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that
neurons
 are used for transporting messages with the help of two endings that are
dendrites
 and terminal buttons.
Cell
 bodies are made of two distinct parts. The circular structure
that is
 present inside
of
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the
cell
 body is known as soma, and
cell
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the cell
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 body contains
number
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a number
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 of extensions which are in
outward
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an outward
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direcion
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direction
, these are called
as
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dendrites
.
Dendrites
 help to receive signals from other cells. The message is
then
 transferred to an
axon
.
Axon
 is a long
cyclindrical
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cylindrical
 structure
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that help
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help
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helps
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 to pass messages from
cell
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the cell
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 body to
some
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other cells,
such
 as
another
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other
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neurons
, muscles, or glands.
While
 transferring the message, an action potential is generated, which is an electrical signal travelling to
an
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the
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 end of an
axon
.
However
,
axon
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the axon
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 is surrounded by
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a mylein
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mylein
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myelin
 sheath, and
help
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helps
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 with the speed of neural impulses.
At the end
 of
neuron
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the neuron
a neuron
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, several
bulb like
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 structures are present that are known as terminal buttons. These buttons help in connecting
neuron
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neurons
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 with other cells and are connected with
dendrites
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the dendrites
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 of
a
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different
neuron
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neurons
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words neurons, dendrites, cell, axon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • neuron
  • nervous system
  • dendrites
  • soma
  • cell body
  • nucleus
  • axon
  • electrical impulses
  • myelin sheath
  • axon terminals
  • neurotransmitters
  • synapse
  • signal transmission
  • insulating
  • unmyelinated fibers
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