The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about
British
emigration to the selected destination from 2004 to 2007. Overall
, British
emigration showed the highest data in Australia
at the end
of the period
.
British
people migrated to Australia
, Spain, New Zealand, the USA, and France between 2004 and 2007. At the beginning of the period
, just over 40 thousand
British
moved to Australia
. Approximately 23 thousand
people migrated to New Zealand in 2004. France showed the same number
in 2004. New Zeeland illustrated similar data throughout the period
.
Just under 20 thousand
migrants
moved to France in 2007, and it showed the lowest number
at the end
of the period
. Most migrants
migrated to Australia
in 2006, and it was just over 50 thousand
. In 2005, the number
of migrants
was just nearly 40 thousand
in Australia
, and it was the highest number
this
year. The USA showed the lowest number
of migrants
in 2005; it was just under 20 thousand
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