Some people believe that there should b fixed punishments for each type of crome. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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essay, I will examine both views and explain why I lean towards the latter.
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On the other hand
, I strongly believe that individual crime is more considerable when it comes single situation. Linking Words
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break
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breaks
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how bad Fix the infinitive
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instead
of receiving the death penalty.
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