The shown Line graph below illustrates the condition of participation by club members to different courses.
The
graph
presents the situation of participation
in three different activities
by the members of the club between 1995-2015.
Overall
, gym
activities
and team sports
show almost similar
trend Correct article usage
a similar
whereas
swimming has constantly
declining Correct article usage
a constantly
graph
. The most progressive nature of the graph
was in gym
activities
.
A similar feature in the nature of graphs was observed in the teams
Change to a genitive case
team's
teams'
sports
and gym
activities
. However
, teams
Change the noun form
team
sports
represented a fluctuating nature, with an increase in involvement from 1995 to 2010 but a slight drop in 2015. In the end, the teams
Change to a genitive case
team's
teams'
sports
hold the 1st position with the highest participation
of almost 33% of members.The gym
activities
were able to increase there number to participation
constantly from approximately 5% to 25%
In the beginning (1995), swimming was the task which
most people were involved almost around 50%. It shows a sharp decline till 2010, with only 15% of the club members participating. The Change preposition
in which
graph
was maintained steady from 2010 to 2015. The ratio of participation
from 1995 to 2015 was greater than 1:3, reaching the last
position among the three activities
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