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The line graph provides information about British people's consumption of three various fast food namely Hamburgers, Fish and chips and Pizza from 1970 to 1990. To give an overview, it was noticeable that Fish and chips were most favourable in the UK
whereas
 Hamburger and Pizza analysed an upward trend throughout the
period
. To commence with, it was observed that Hamburger consumption began at 300 in 1970 and it slightly dwindled in the next
period
. Even though, in the middle of the
period
, it dropped and reached around 210.
Furthermore
, throughout the
period
 it analysed levelled off. Moving forward with Fish and Chips, embarked under 100 in 1970 and after that, it continuously upgraded in 1975 to reach 100.
Moreover
, it again observed
slight
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 increase in the till
period
.
However
, during the next two decades, it was boosted significantly.
Furthermore
, Pizza
also
 started under the 100 and continuously upgraded till 1985.
Additionally
, it climbed suddenly and reached nearly 290 in 1990.
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