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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

#countries #people #history #house #research
There is no denying the fact that some
people
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interesting
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 in knowing the
history
about
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 any place they live inside, in
this
 essay I am going to discuss their expected reasons for doing
this
 thing, and
also
 talk about the ways they are able to use in order to find out the information they are seeking to know. To
began
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 with, we
shall
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 not lose sight of the fact that
people
 are commonly held to
belief
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 that knowing
every thing
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 about their house is an important thing to do as a try to answer any question or miss understanding in the future from anybody they might face, in other word, whether it is a right thing to do or not, they will keep digging into the
history
 to have all the data they need.
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 to consider
,
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 is the way
people
 must
use to
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find
this
history
,
according to
 a social study published in the
wall street journalist
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 on
twenty
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 – first of October twenty hundred
an
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nine, which was
intitled
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"
history
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 finding", the study results concluded that one of the
bests
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 ways of searching for
history
 is using trusted websites only,
for instance
,
people
 could use "voco website' to look for any data they need, and that because voco is a website known for it is trustful founders who have a special interest to express the right data only. In conclusion, I
tent
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 to
belief
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 that knowing
history
 in general has become an essential part of our everyday life, and we must keep collecting all the knowledge as
most
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 as we can.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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