7.You borrowed an item from your friend. While it was in your possession, it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for lending the item to you. Explain how it got damaged. Tell your friend what you plan to do about it.

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Dear Phoenix, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to express my sincere apologies for the

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incident involving your bicycle that happened when I was using it.

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, I am incredibly grateful to you for lending me your bike. It would be very helpful when my car is on maintenance. Yesterday, when I was on the way to my home, I ran into a tree to avoid a big rock on the street. Luckily, I did not get any physical injury, but the front wheel of the bike was

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the collision. Fortunately, the damage is not hard to fix. My husband, a

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mechanic, has agreed to assist me in addressing the problem. He plans to buy a new wheel for the bicycle, and together, I can ensure that it can be replaced properly. Given his experience in similar situations, I believe that the repair can be carried out effectively. Please accept my apologies for the damage. Again, thank you for letting me use your bike. Best wishes, Lana

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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