The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.
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The table compares the rate of six individuals for each family in Britain over the period of 20 years.
overall
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, noticeably that person two families by far the most important grow up
while
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the first decreases in Eights and dramatically rise in Millennium .
however
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, the sixth and fifth people fell down during the period . In 1981 ,
it is clear that
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the first person had children increased by about 17 % but in 2001 it rose dramatically to 26 %.
although
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that fifth saw the highest by 8 % but after many years saw the lowest by 6% .So , the second overtook by 31-34 % from 1981 to 2001 .
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, the significance is that the third family went up by 18 % ; after a few years, it dropped to 15 % .
on the other hand
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, the
last
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family a negligible amount to 8% - 2% children .
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