Write a letter to the airline. In this letter - describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight - explain how missing the flight affected you - make it clear what you would like the airline to do

Esteemed Sir, I, Sandeep Kaur: a client of your airline, am writing

this

letter to express my concern about my missing flight on Wednesday. I have booked a flight from Toronto to Delhi for October 5, 2023. The departure time of the plane was 8:45 pm, as the airport is only 10 Km away from my residence, I left the home around 6:30 pm so that I could get enough time for check-in. Unfortunately, on my way to the airport, I met with a terrifying accident and missed my flight. I am worried because next week I have to attend my brother's marriage.

Moreover

, I was extremely enthusiastic as I was going to India after a long period of 5 years,

nevertheless

I tried to book another departure, but none is available until the end of

this

month. I would greatly appreciate it if you could please prioritize my request and book a seat if anyone is cancelling his/her journey. It would be a great help for me. I look forward to your prompt response and assistance on

this

matter. Yours faithfully Sandeep Kaur

Submitted by sdeepkaur9 on Thu Oct 19 2023

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8 paragraphs

184 words

8.50

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Write a letter to the airline. In this letter - describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight - explain how missing the flight affected you - make it clear what you would like the airline to do

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